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Vampires are the creatures of night,
Whose kiss is an eternal bite,
They'll feast on blood until the dawn,
For in the sunlight they will be gone.

Some fear them yet some do not,
Those who love them have never been caught,
For when you're turned and dead for good,
That can put you in a horrible mood.

As the undead they cannot die,
Not even when choked with a tie,
There are only afew things you can do,
But best to send a hunter to do this for you.

They will stake them in the heart,
It's almost a slaying form of art,
Then the vampire will turn to ash,
And the rest of them will try to dash.

But not all vampires are as evil as you think,
Some write their life stories all out in ink,
Others never wanted to be this way,
They had absolutey no say.

Still vampires are creatures of the night,
With a very fierce eternal bite.

{The End}
Vampires are awesome. I heart vampire movies! :P
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DvArtGal13 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
VAMPIRE FOREVER!!!
awesome poem
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MrLovelessss Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
nice job :)
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Ganryukou Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
Aah, vampires.
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vampeve-97 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Student
OMFG vampyrs!!<3
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vampirelaw Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
I LOVE IT
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stacey1234 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2012  Student Artist
that is well awesome love it
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zooloo12345 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2012
Vampires!!!
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kazia202 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2011
Bravo my praise goes out to you in this excellent portrayal of these magnificent creatures of the night :)
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Redropp Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Very good work, but hunters can go down and die. Your right not all vampires aren't bad they can be quite lovley.
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wolfscream Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2011
best ...love it
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DzeniiBee Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVE VAMPIRES!!
<3 <3 <3
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rosyandpale Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010
nice
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Rissygirl16 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2010
:)
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sasusaku21096 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2009
i loved it!!!

vampires rule!
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:iconrissygirl16:
Rissygirl16 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2009
Thanks! And I agree!
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sasusaku21096 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2009
your welcome
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Ilove-blood Featured By Owner May 28, 2008
amazin!
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Rissygirl16 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2008
Thank you!
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BillyGoat123 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2006
its pretty good, but i find it too cheery to portray vampires.
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:iconrissygirl16:
Rissygirl16 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2006
Sorry I'll try darker next time! :)
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:iconbillygoat123:
BillyGoat123 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2006
merci, keep it up!
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Death-on-Wings Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2006
Pretty. x3

Makes me feel as if I want to meet a Vampire now. XD

And, agreed. Vampires rule. x3
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Rissygirl16 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2006
I know I heart them so! :D :heart:
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